Jon2's stuff

[Jon2]

Okay, I'm looking forward to that

[FCY-JMDK-WLKY]

I just read 'Silence'. I heard ppl calling you very mature for your age and I believe that's more than true. You can't see a 20 year-old write a chorus that amazing. Really good stuff, I'm gonna take some time reading the rest.

[Jon2]

^Thank you very much. It is one of my best tracks, but I don't consider it my favorite... So keep on reading, it's worth it.

[Jon2]

It's bumping up time!

After I started posting my lyrics in my blog, this thread has kind of went dead... But to keep it alive, here are some lyrics that I've written during the last 3 months, but haven't posted in my blog yet. Most of them are just verses, but here you go.

27th of 9th

Fall is everywhere
Sanctuary that never bears
I've waited blaze forever and
what I wait for is never there
The dark blue of my dreams
and the variety I lay within
Set off a brand new life
A memory withers and dies

Forgotten what I felt inside
Recalling how my thoughts were tied
Questioning do I belong
to where I've placed my soul
Living crossfire makes me cold
with this fear of being alone
Heal the memories pure and white
I'm fighting not to sleep tonight

The Last

Lifting his head
setting his eyes
releasing his mind
to rise up and fly
rhythm beneath
sent by his feet
skips a thin tone
while a new era is shown

Forfeit the day
the rebirth of age
Deepen the hole
of being alone

The void from last night
this time with light
volume too high
- he starts to fly
Guitar in the floor
Sitting behind closed doors
A memory hits his ear
causing him to fear

Smile makes him cry
he's numb one last time
Until his image comes to pieces
he stares to the Sickness

Empty Wings

The cloudy painting of my mind
reflects all my life inside
My heart has turned into a ghetto
as I live through my own shadow

The sky wanted to be open
However, my love, made it hopeless
Until I saw the glow in the glimpse
shining with empty wings

I fly to eternity
to feel the rain cry
I breathe alone eternily
But sensing the beautiful prize of love

[Jon2]

Another b-side, written last night.

Thoughts of Darkness

How does it feel like
tonight’s paralyzed
and in the same time
it holds peace inside
Wicked whispers fly high
while I come to life
the fall has captured
my empty state of mind

What has came to be
In this slate of disease
the silver is blue
and the gold turns to hue
The weak touch of light
hurts my bare eyes
But no one can sense
what I do above this fence

SEE
BREATHE
MAKE ME BELIEVE
AGAIN

Set what you hide
deep down in your mind
To some other place
Somewhere out of graze
Stare at your fate
and if it’s incomplete
concentrate on faith
and make it complete

Ride on to low
stop before dawn
follow the purity
metaphors of thorn
I came to feel
Something unseen
rock my soul, play it out
feel the rhythm, without a doubt

PLAY
LAY
FOR OBLIVION’S SAKE
TONIGHT

And it’s not only a dream
to be able to breathe
the same word than Him
until the rebirth
I will stay standby
as far as the light
reaches my bleeding
my wait is unhealing

[Jon2]

Geez, easy on the criticism...

A new song, entitled Thorns of Love:

Hanging on a letter
never sent or received
Tears cleanse the stains
which never breath here
I blow a black whisper
below the seeping pain
so your heart will grasp it
and let me down once again

I want to be sick! [X2]

Sucking me closer to
a state of emptiness
your threading perfume
scrap me into pieces
Losing all these memories
Darkness makes me demur
Feeling so lonely now
I crawl to lament for you

My wishes come true [X2]
but so do you

[Chorus]:
This season of perplexity
bleeding and ardor
Flaming my darkness
with fireworks of God
the fuse must be burnt now
my icy heart is moaning
I’m sliding to roses
And towards to thorns of love

[Bridge]:
AND THEY BURN
MY TWISTED SOUL
TAKING TURN
FAREWELL HOLLOW

[Chorus]

[FCY-JMDK-WLKY]

You know my opinion about it. "My wishes come true but so do you" is simple, yet really powerful. Cant wait to hear this with music, so I'm really looking forward to it.

Keep doing what you do.